Yaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwn.
Oh man that was so boring..........the animation was excellent though, you are definitely talented.
Yaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwn.
Oh man that was so boring..........the animation was excellent though, you are definitely talented.
ehhhh
The writing needs to improve other than that it was alright.
Cool cool
It was pretty cool. I just didn't get why the aliens would give her a suit that could defeat them. Other than that it was cool.
not funny
Random comedy is usually funny, but this was just random without any humor. I think your art could be put to better use, I would suggest you drawing and someone else writing, just practice and you'll get better.
Practice and get better at what? Earning front page and over a dozen portal awards? Too late.
sorry not doin it
I can definitly see you put alot of work into this, but quite frankly it was not funny. The mono voice and the bad writing (jokes) is what killed it. Take your drawing talent and combine it with some good writing and I think you could go far. Oh well better luck next time, just keep trying.
ehhhh
I don't know I just didn't find it funny at all, but good job on the animation. Just keep working on your writing and you will eventually get it. Good luck.
didn't do it for me
Yeah the writing wasn't funny at all, I didn't really understand some parts. The animation was good though, just keep practicing.
RALLY GUD
I would have gave you a 10, but minus one point for not ending it with NEDM. Better luck next time.
ehhhh......
I didn't like it cuz their wasn't really a point for it to be an alien, it could have been someone with mental problems playing the aliens role. It just wasn't funny, but keep practicing. Your drawings are great just gotta work on your material.
Actor in LA who likes to animate for fun!
Age 37, Male
Actor
Los Angeles, CA
Joined on 6/23/04