The hook sounded great, but the lyrics seemed lazy. I didn't feel any rhythm. This is just my opinion, but keep practicing. You'll get better through time! :)
Ow, where's the off switch?!!!!
This is horrible, how could this possibly inspire me to animate? I can even hum this. The singing is bad, you're right.
this is the original with possibly some added bass and drums.
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